Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Human beings are biologically differentiated as man and women, bestowing corresponding abilities to them by means of which they can co-exist with each other in the society in harmony and perpetual peace. An ideal society does not suppress either men or women based on their biological differences, but, instead maintain a sense of respect for both sexes and assign respective roles and responsbilities for both of them to perform. It has been suggested that men and women are similar to the "two sides of a coin", without one, another is meaningless or has no use. Therefore, there lies some intrinsic differences among men and women and they might excel at one job as compared to another, men and women, because of their physical differences, should not be accused of not being equally suited for many tasks.
The first and foremost concern we are facing today is the social opression of either men and women in different parts of the world based on the physical differences of men and women. Although they have been able to do most of the works in different ways, there are countless possibilities where women and men can perform on par with each other. For instance, civil engineering, which has been regarded as a forte of men have recently been quite attractive to women as well. More and women are getting involved in this sector including administrative positions of the country which used to be run by men since ancient times. Some famous women leaders such as Queen Elizabeth, Benazir Bhutto are prime examples that women led nations are also equally thriving and developing as led my men. The current patriarchal society just does not accept the fact that women can be as good as men in certain jobs which are considered to be the special abilities of men only. Our current norm and beliefs are merely based on the "men prioritized" societal beliefs. Therefore, human race history and our current global trend has sufficient evidence to claim that men and women can indeed perform equally on certain tasks.
Furthermore, althouh men and women have physical differences, the difference are so minimal that they should not be hindering the tasks each sex can perform. Usually women are condemned for having a small built and lacking in physical power due to poor muscle development, however, there are many globally renowned female atheletes and gymnasts who have far better muscle development as compared to a large number of men. If we compare a normal man and a woman, it has been proven that women are more active, work harder and have better endurance than men in several studies. For example, a normal housewife has to perform all the household chores, do dishes, wash clothes, and look after the child all day since the moment she wakes up; a man on the other hand, under self-conceit believes that he works to earn money and considers himself superior. However, in this case, the woman who works from the moment of opening her eyes in the morning untill she sleeps is the real winner of the debate of who has a better physical capacity. Based on these reasons, men and women, merely depending on the physical differences, should be able to perform the tasks equally.
In contrast to the previous statements, there are some tasks which require more physical abiliies and thus demand more contribution from men as compared to women. In some instances, men has to go beyond what they ought to do to complete the tasks as compared to the women of similar age and built. When chopping woods, if we consider a man and woman of similar age, built, and raised in a similar way, then there is no doubt that a man will be able to chop more woods than the woman. However, they could use different technique or use some ingenious methods to outsmart their competitors, thereby rendering their physical differences as a minuscule factor in deciding the result. In such circumstances, the result could be in the favor of anyone; this emphasizes that physical differences can indeed be advantageous for men in performing tasks which require raw strength and power, women, on the other hand can overcome their disadvantage by using some clever tricks and techniques to boost their power and perform the tasks wisely. Therefore, physical differences alone cannot determine if men and women are not suited for the tasks, it depends on their individual abilities -- it could be their ingenious techniques, psychological tactics, physical raw power or some other methods which could boost their abilities further to the next level and allowing them to perform their task as good as the other person (either men or women).
In conclusion, although it is true that there are certain physical differences amongst men and women, it is not the deciding factor to derive a conclusion that they are not equally stuited to perform a task. It is also imperative to analyze their individual strengths based on their cleverness, ability to solve problems, use of novel techniques and their perception towards their task which are essential mental fortitude required to resolve any tasks or problems in life. It is for these reasons, currently women are becoming more aware of their potential and taking over the tasks which would have been otherwise considered only for men. In the future, we will be greeting more female presidents of the nation, more female athletes, and even more female scientists who discover novel ideas for the society.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...etter muscle development as compared to a large number of men. If we compare a normal man and a w...
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Line 7, column 385, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a similar way" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...woman of similar age, built, and raised in a similar way, then there is no doubt that a man will...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as for, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, such as, in contrast to, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 45.0 19.5258426966 230% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 44.0 14.8657303371 296% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.3162921348 230% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 61.0 33.0505617978 185% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 100.0 58.6224719101 171% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4541.0 2235.4752809 203% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 917.0 442.535393258 207% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9520174482 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.50290903609 4.55969084622 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6671563283 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 397.0 215.323595506 184% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432933478735 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1440.9 704.065955056 205% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.1450458601 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.178571429 118.986275619 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.75 23.4991977007 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.21951772744 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457421793666 0.243740707755 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1399823926 0.0831039109588 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973632101001 0.0758088955206 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290299127656 0.150359130593 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451484739756 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 48.8420337079 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 201.0 100.480337079 200% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...etter muscle development as compared to a large number of men. If we compare a normal man and a w...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 385, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a similar way" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...woman of similar age, built, and raised in a similar way, then there is no doubt that a man will...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as for, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, such as, in contrast to, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 45.0 19.5258426966 230% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 44.0 14.8657303371 296% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.3162921348 230% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 61.0 33.0505617978 185% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 100.0 58.6224719101 171% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4541.0 2235.4752809 203% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 917.0 442.535393258 207% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9520174482 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.50290903609 4.55969084622 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6671563283 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 397.0 215.323595506 184% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432933478735 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1440.9 704.065955056 205% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.1450458601 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.178571429 118.986275619 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.75 23.4991977007 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.21951772744 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457421793666 0.243740707755 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1399823926 0.0831039109588 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973632101001 0.0758088955206 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290299127656 0.150359130593 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451484739756 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 48.8420337079 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 201.0 100.480337079 200% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.