Some parents and teachers think that children’s behavior should be strictly controlled. While some think that children should be free to behave. Discuss both the advantages and disadvantages.
In this contemporary era, it is a contentious topic whether educational instructors and parents are focusing to control the attitudes of young folks strictly or others agrees that students should be permissioned to show their activities without any barrier. In this essay, I will discuss the positive and negative effects of letter and former nations in upcoming paragraph.
Analyzing the statement and explaining further, the first reason behind this, that manners in teenage students are main aspect in their growing stage. If we cannot control the behavior in the early stage of their life, then its consequence will be dangerous in the future. For example, in research of British, the educator in schools who was taking misbehave with their classmate, was not got higher education due to strict rules & law. Consequently, the academic journey was finished.
On the other hand, individuals believes that schools should be given proper chance to their children without any intercut. Moreover, student have the right to choose their interest so that they have not faced any problem in the future. For instance, many students have no idea to take decision in university life which subject should be having their interest of environment. Therefore, they selected any subject which direction was opposite to his thought.
We should conclude that it is important to strictly controlled students according to their behavior but also give full opportunities to explore their talent. However, it will depend upon the mind set that what we must do is to make sure that positive cons are encouraged.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... former nations in upcoming paragraph. Analyzing the statement and explaining f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27450980392 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72576490393 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635294117647 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7296253719 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.083333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150686087759 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539911949949 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059466064912 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922716245185 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267289070665 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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