Many people believe that every individual is responsible for his/her own healthy lifestyle. Others believe that governments should take care of it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People hold different views on who should take the responsibility of public’s health. Some think that governments ought to care for people’s healthy lifestyles while I am on the side of those who believe that every individual need to try for their health benefits.
On the one hand, there are several ways that governments can help their people to be healthy, the most obvious one of which is to improve sport facilities with building more sport centers and enhancing sport equipment. This is because the more such kinds of facilities are available, the more people are likely to be encouraged to use them in order to make their lives healthier. Reducing the number of fast food locations is another viable way that authorities can offer. Should governments can diminish the amount of fast food consumed by people, they can get rid of one of the main factors of unhealthy life as a result. These are the reasons why some people put the responsibility on governments’ shoulders.
Nevertheless, people can also take some steps, such as following a diet and doing physical exercises regularly, to live in a healthy life. Regarding the former, it is one of the most important aspects of being in a good condition because if people are on a diet they try to avoid eating saturated fat-based food, which can lead them to become overweight when it is eaten more than enough. As for the latter, regular exercises can keep people in a shape and in a healthy condition. In comparison with people who are used to a sedentary life, they are prevented from poor health in certain extent. Thus, people should take care of themselves.
To conclude, although governments can help with good sport facilities and a reduction in the number of fast food centers, I believe that the responsibility should be on people as they are the ones who make decisions such as sticking to a diet and exercising.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, thus, while, as for, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81515151515 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79072483187 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493939393939 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.1436485879 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.230769231 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203513378602 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905381140739 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778574372046 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155663069364 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093554987907 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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