Many people believe that every individual is responsible for his/her own healthy lifestyle. others believe that governments should take care of it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There has been much recent policy advocacy related to what the proper role of governments in healthcare should be. Although such issues have been treated with seriousness by governments, the responsibility for taking care of one’s well-being should rest largely with individuals as they are the main agents for creating healthy lifestyles.
the advocates of strong governmental intervention often indicate that healthy eating habits can be formed in early life through school policies. In many countries, the vast majority of students attend public schools and in recent years, many new diet-related policies have been implemented with the aim of curing addiction to unhealthy foods, such as decreasing the total intake of saturated fat and sugar not only in school lunches but also in the ubiquitous vending machines installed around most schools. Therefore, if such nutritional approach can be sustained, students’ wellness will likely improve, and as adults, they are more likely to eschew fast food for healthier alternatives.
Despite such clear benefits from governmental involvement, people should play a pivotal role in regulating their eating patterns. In fact, humans are always tempted by differently kinds of pleasure, and delicious yet unhealthy food has always been the strongest temptation. Therefore, it is not uncommon to see a great many persons, on diet, trying to circumvent rules so as to satisfy such basic desire. Consequently, were one to remain inactive in embracing healthy nutritional routines, no matter what steps governments would take could effect positive changes. For example, even a country, such as France, which has imposed strict regulations over food that children are served is still facing an obesity crisis. Hence it is people’s active engagement in developing a dietary discipline can help consistently combat poor health.
In conclusion, although governmental involvement in the introduction of food-related polices can generally improve people’s fitness, to make such enhancement last, it is imperative for individuals to proactively adopt a balanced diet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, so, still, therefore, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66666666667 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03269240298 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672955974843 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.006688805 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.166666667 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124705049386 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435511857169 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373881992184 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809942221769 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416390307336 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.