To commence with there are deluges of arguments in favour of paper books. The most preponderant one is that good for eyesight. To elaborate it when individuals read from paper books they feel more comfortable as compare to reading book on screen. Because while reading e-book there are some raise that emitted from screen which is harms human eyesight. Thanks to wide range of advantages paper books offers. Individuals can enhance the quality and productivity of their lives with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Hence, it is apparent that many people consider paper books one of the best way of reading and it will not be replaced with electronic books.
Furthermore another pivotal aspect of above aforementioned proposition is that, it is only likely to help in one excel and thrive in varied areas such as no distraction. This is because when masses reads from paper books it is more convenient and there is not any distraction. But when anyone read electronics book there other notification that causing attention problems for example social media apps notification like whtsapp, facebook, instragram and so on. For instance the study results published by the government of Australia in March 2014 and April 2016 clearly indicates that paper books are one of the best method when it comes to reading and it will not be replaced by e - books. Hence, it is crucial and critical for the development of the society.
On the other hand a section of society contradicts above aforementioned by providing reliable justification they claim that less expensive and long lasting. To make it justifiable electronic books are long lasting there is no need to carry extra load like paper books. With the help of e books things become much more easier as compare to paper books. Because electronic books are cheaper as compare to paper books. Apart from this these kind of books are up to date not as paper based books. They are out dated and does not provide the clear picture of any phenomenon. There are chances that electronics book shall replaced paper books in future, But it is uncertain, Hence, it is clear why many people consider electronic books are best not paper based books.
To conclude having pondered over above stated it is apparent that despite having some benefits of e books they can not replace the paper books in future.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e as compare to reading book on screen. Because while reading e-book there are some rai...
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Line 1, column 292, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'raises'?
Suggestion: raises
...use while reading e-book there are some raise that emitted from screen which is harms...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...t be replaced with electronic books. Furthermore another pivotal aspect of above aforeme...
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Line 3, column 398, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'apps'' or 'app's'?
Suggestion: apps'; app's
...ntion problems for example social media apps notification like whtsapp, facebook, in...
^^^^
Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... the help of e books things become much more easier as compare to paper books. Because elec...
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Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... e books things become much more easier as compare to paper books. Because electro...
^^
Line 5, column 390, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...s. Because electronic books are cheaper as compare to paper books. Apart from this...
^^
Line 5, column 433, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...compare to paper books. Apart from this these kind of books are up to date not as paper ba...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 638, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...tronics book shall replaced paper books in future, But it is uncertain, Hence, it is clea...
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Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it is apparent that despite having some benefits of e books they can not replace...
^^
Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ks they can not replace the paper books in future.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94430379747 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63195163738 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478481012658 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4104240014 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.65 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349064655061 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124426194465 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923566331916 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238480571164 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554289489106 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e as compare to reading book on screen. Because while reading e-book there are some rai...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 292, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'raises'?
Suggestion: raises
...use while reading e-book there are some raise that emitted from screen which is harms...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...t be replaced with electronic books. Furthermore another pivotal aspect of above aforeme...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 398, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'apps'' or 'app's'?
Suggestion: apps'; app's
...ntion problems for example social media apps notification like whtsapp, facebook, in...
^^^^
Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... the help of e books things become much more easier as compare to paper books. Because elec...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... e books things become much more easier as compare to paper books. Because electro...
^^
Line 5, column 390, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...s. Because electronic books are cheaper as compare to paper books. Apart from this...
^^
Line 5, column 433, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...compare to paper books. Apart from this these kind of books are up to date not as paper ba...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 638, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...tronics book shall replaced paper books in future, But it is uncertain, Hence, it is clea...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it is apparent that despite having some benefits of e books they can not replace...
^^
Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ks they can not replace the paper books in future.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94430379747 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63195163738 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478481012658 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4104240014 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.65 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349064655061 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124426194465 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923566331916 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238480571164 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554289489106 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.