Nowadays good conducts matters a lot in the society. In our world today, good behavior is the responsibility of every individual especially the ones on the limelight. In this essay I will discuss the factors and impact of good moral, and how people in the limelight have a major role to play by setting example for others by their good behavior.
Presently, the type of character portrayed in the limelight Plays an important role in our society. For instance, when I was growing up i lost my mum. I was just 15years and I did not get much morals from her. So I admired chimamanda the writer because of the beautiful and energetic characters she portrays which robbed off on me today. In other words, what we watch and see play’s a vital role in our lives.
One of the factors of good character is diligent. Attitude can take one where money can not. Good conduct is very essential and should be displayed purposefully by people in the limelight. Because it can sharpen a lot of lives in the world. For example in our world today where we have orphans who grew up without their parents or good guidance. So their day to day learning comes from societal display, from the moral examples set by people in the limelight. Either positively or negatively.
In this essay I have discussed the factors and impacts of good behavior in our world today. So therefore I agree that people in the limelight have a responsibility to set an example for others by their good behavior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67175572519 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66065304878 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522900763359 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9706679728 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4117647059 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52941176471 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390738718911 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120680018653 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165285173605 0.0667982634062 247% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285588058006 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15382408498 0.056905535591 270% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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