Dear sir’
I would like my child to have a day off from school for a family celebration, on 7th of December 2022. My child’s uncle who was involved in a serious motor accident months back has been discharged from the hospital, so the entire family has called for big celebration because he made it after months in the coma.
My child would have the opportunity to meet our other family members, especially the ones he has not met before that lives in other states and countries, it’s going to be a big gathering for every of our family member.
I understand the implications of my child’s absence from school for the family. So I will guild him on every subject that he misses, and also pay serious attention to make sure my child catch up on the work missed
I will be glad if my request is granted
Your faithfully
Mrs Ubani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...e my child catch up on the work missed I will be glad if my request is granted ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I will be glad if my request is granted Your faithfully Mrs Ubani
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...y request is granted Your faithfully Mrs Ubani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 699.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56862745098 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50409549625 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633986928105 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.2768714229 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.8 76.5299724578 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6 16.8248392259 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334642682791 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182830312159 0.0766984524023 238% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562340659707 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159789904964 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741030750352 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 8.37731958763 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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