Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Concerning the issue of the more accessible and affordable function of technology, it is widely believed that many adults and students can easily work or study at their home. As far as I am concerned, I do partially think that this is a positive development due to several reasons below
First of all, it can be said with certainty that people can work more effectively when they are at home. This is due to the fact that people have their own comfortable atmosphere to study or work with full of facilities they need. As a result, they may more concentrate on their task to complete it efficiently.
Second of all, a subsequent factor could be because work from home is the best way to reduce wasted time. Because people do not have to go to their companies or schools, it will cut down a great deal amount of time and provide them with more meaning time to work. Moreover, they can also have an extra time to take a rest or spend with their families and friends.
In contrast, it must be admitted that work from home will lead to a lack in communication. This is due to the fact that when working at home, people have less face-to-face talk with others, resulted in the feeling of isolation.
Taking everything into consideration, peopla have to weigh up their thoughts to what extent this issue should be supported. However, the discussions are convincing enough to lead me to the conclusion that people should study or work at home in certain time.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... best way to reduce wasted time. Because people do not have to go to their compan...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, may, moreover, second, so, in contrast, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60384615385 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64982694534 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2395667184 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.818181818 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268490630899 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108098475965 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674272094534 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160489756766 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687312516593 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... best way to reduce wasted time. Because people do not have to go to their compan...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, may, moreover, second, so, in contrast, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60384615385 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64982694534 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2395667184 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.818181818 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268490630899 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108098475965 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674272094534 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160489756766 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687312516593 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.