Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Concerning the issue of gaining one’s goals, it is believed that achieving one’s aims is mostly by chance. As far as I am concerned, I do partially disagree with this opinion for several reasons which will be given out in this essay.
First of all, it can be said with certainty that everyone who makes a lot of efforts instead of being lucky will achieve their goals successfully. For example, after a number of failed experiments, in January 1882, Edison switched on the first steam-generating power station, which provided electricity supplies to street lamps and several private dwellings at Holborn Viaduct, London.
In addition to this, a subsequent factor could be because luck appears conditionally instead of accidentally. Luck only lends you, for a beginning, to help you make much more efforts, continue to work harder to achieve greater results in the future. That luck is just a test that life check out your bravery. Moreover, since your achievements is just a refund you give to the life, you shouldn’t depend on luck anymore.
In contrast, it must be admitted that some inventions or experiments achieve success by a question of luck. For instance, while Fleming thought it was impossible to find a treatment to fight against infection, he occasionally found penicillin, which can be used to decrease the death rate in this illness.
Taking everything into consideration, people have to weigh up in their thoughts to what extent this issue should be supported. However, the discussions are convincing enough to lead me to the conclusion that gaining the achievements just depends on a little luck.
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...st of all, it can be said with certainty that everyone who makes a lot of efforts...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13157894737 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94083017319 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0205128952 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.75 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235130286396 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080305629117 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512679880683 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111928960974 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494073991102 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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