More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work.What will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?
Increasing population is migrating to cities, leaving their farms and fields in rural areas, to seek for jobs. Mass shifting to urban areas cause burden on city infrastructure and lack of work force in countryside but this can be solved by taking decisive steps.
To begin with, one of the major problem which this relocation pose is that strain on public services. At present, urban areas are designed to withstand a certain population count because of limited areas and resources. This means influx of people form rural areas could result in poor living conditions for City residents. Another issue associated with it is stiff competition among workers and difficulty to find affordable house. For example, in developing countries, rural people who shift to cities usually work on lower wages and are willing to live in crowded house.causing problems for workers in the city. Lastly, lack of workers in rural areas, especially for agricultural work ,which effect food production, evening may lead to food scarcity in the future.
However, this problem is not insurmountable, it can be curved using certain measures. Firstly, the government is obligated to invest money for betterment of society means investing in rural areas is must to provide facilities. By providing job opportunity , better healthcare and education people can be avoided to move to cities. Secondly, promoting sustainable urban development is helpful to address the needs of city dwellers. This should not only ensure affordability and accessibility of houses, but also reduce city sprawl and urban congestion. Furthermore, as people rely on farmers to get food, government should emphasize on farming sector either by ensuring the minimum selling price for crops or by investing funds to provide modern technology and seed. Which helps farmers to generate more revenue and live a Prosperous life in villages.
In conclusion, while there are certain problems associated with the shifting of people to cities, with the allocation of funds on basic necessities these problems can be solved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35582822086 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86400539636 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59509202454 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.405485507 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.125 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198517803733 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629651657219 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414509591878 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112870650815 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315478482911 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.