Task 2.As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
There is a widespread belief that besides profit maximization, enterprises should also hold accountable for societal manners. Despite several controversies, I partly agree with this opinion for the following reasons.
On the one hand, the effort of the enterprises to prosper may have numerous benefits. Firstly, the higher profits earned by these corporations, the more taxes they have to pay to the government. As a result, the national and local authorities will receive more revenue to allocate resources to several crucial fields of the community, including education and the healthcare system. Secondly, earning huge profits also endow opportunities for enterprises to develop their business. Resultingly, firms can utilize their money for the expansion of infrastructure, which requires more workforce and ultimately alleviates the rate of unemployment in the community.
On the other hand, I firmly agree that in addition to maximizing profits, the business should also hold profound responsibility for the public. In terms of the environment, several activities of enterprises may pose a significant influence on the ecosystems. Without appropriate regulations, haphazard manufacturing planning of the industries can lead to the release of toxic waste, which stimulates global warming and environmental degradation. For example, if factories introduce a restriction on the discharge of chemical waste into water reservoirs, water pollution can be efficaciously attenuated. From an economical perspective, enterprises can also contribute to the support of those who are less fortunate such as the unemployed or elder people. Moreover, providing funding for philanthropic organizations regularly is also one of the effective ways to promote the enterprise’s public image and enhance their reputations. For instance, some giant corporations such as Vinamilk or Unilever have significantly promoted their brand awareness via a number of charitable campaigns for educational institutions and ethnic minorities in different parts of the world.
In conclusion, also making profits play an indispensable role in the development of the business, I believe that they should also pay attention more to their social responsibilities.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.88615384615 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4350094528 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624615384615 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3598342248 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.533333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132677509432 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436543359905 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465881206864 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860218707416 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308546506381 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.85 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.88615384615 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4350094528 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624615384615 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3598342248 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.533333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132677509432 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436543359905 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465881206864 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860218707416 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308546506381 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.85 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.