The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.
The diagram gives information about the process of making ethanol fuel from corn.
In general, there are eight steps in total, starting with harvesting corn from fields and ending with transporting ethanol fuel to the gas station. It can be seen that the production of corn-based ethanol is totally by hand.
At the beginning of the process, corn is collected from the field after storing it in a large warehouse. The next step is it takes approximately four hours to mill and cook harvested corn with water. Until corn is cooked, it then undergoes a process of fermentation which consumes 48 hours to complete.
After fermenting, the solid product is separated into the liquid, which is purified to get rid of water for the extraction of pure ethanol. After that, this process takes about 5 hours to finish, and the solid material ends up being a by-product of the process. Finally, this ethanol is stored for a set time before being transported to retailers, ready to be sold.
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- Some people say that in all levels of education from primary schools to universities too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 32.9175257732 24% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84523809524 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66804811156 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613095238095 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.789427915 44.8134815571 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.4444444444 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226540913889 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108442190783 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103587670246 0.0603063233224 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182560684532 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119184546096 0.0580467560999 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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