Some people think that intelligence is innate while other think that we can improve our intelligence through learning.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
There is no doubt that intelligence makes people superior to other species in the world. While debating on the intelligence, one group states that people born with intelligence, but I believe in other scholars’ views who think that intelligence can be improvised via learning.
With regards to the view of scholars who believe that intelligence is inborn, intelligence is directly intercorrelated with the genes of parents. As a result, children can get superior IQ through genes from their parents, who have a good quality of IQ. Moreover, the memorizing capacity differs widely among people because it is something that people born with rather than creating or improving via training. For instance, the IQ level of Albert Anstine that he got from genes from his parents was superior to that of most other scholars. However, one may question on the fact that intelligence of a person may not be sustainable without practicing or improving via training.
In terms of the other people with whom I agree that training and education can improve the knowledge of an individual in a particular sector. This may result in creating professionals such as doctors, engineers, accountants etc. who demonstrate higher level of IQ after getting training and education than the untrained people. So, it can be stated that IQ of a trained professionals can be improved after continuous learning even though they get average IQ through their genes from parents. In fact, I believe that most of the people in this world who born with a decent IQ, which is not innate demonstrate their talent in organizations and reach to the apex of success.
In conclusion, though a group of specialists opines that intelligence comes from the genes of parents, I firmly agree with the other people who demonstrate that continuous training and proper education can make significant improvement in the intelligence of people.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 371, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'professional'?
Suggestion: professional
..., it can be stated that IQ of a trained professionals can be improved after continuous learni...
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Line 5, column 427, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to even'
Suggestion: to even
...n be improved after continuous learning even though they get average IQ through thei...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 7.30460921844 287% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16504854369 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99518365803 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488673139159 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0082455313 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.769230769 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225779083475 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087323652692 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620357293206 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167026873286 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521404326421 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 371, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'professional'?
Suggestion: professional
..., it can be stated that IQ of a trained professionals can be improved after continuous learni...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 427, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to even'
Suggestion: to even
...n be improved after continuous learning even though they get average IQ through thei...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 7.30460921844 287% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16504854369 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99518365803 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488673139159 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0082455313 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.769230769 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225779083475 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087323652692 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620357293206 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167026873286 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521404326421 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.