More and more businesses as well as individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.
There is no doubt that technology has rapidly gained popularity among business professionals and common people all over the world. A significant number of companies and persons is preferring to maintain communications through technology instead of meeting in person, which was a common trend in past decades. This essay will explore some of the major merits and demerits of using technology in lieu of face-to-face meeting.
With regards to the businesses for professional purposes, organizations that encourage meeting in online platforms can enjoy greater flexibility in terms of time than the companies that conduct their conversations in person. This is because arranging an internal office meeting is least time consuming and all employees, who work in different departments can participate from their desks without going to the meeting room, which may locate in different floor or complex. As a diverse group of employees from several departments attend the meeting in online, so they can respond to any queries rapidly that results in improving efficiency and productivity of the companies. On the other hand, professionals sometimes face unexpected interruptions and distractions while communicating with each other. Employees while attending an important meeting can get disconnected because of internet issues and they may also get distracted from colleagues if some of them are chatting with each other. This can result in improper understanding of the agenda in the meeting and making errors at work.
In terms of individuals, who conversate socially, they can make new friends easily when using the social platforms such as Facebook, Tweeter, and Instagram. As a significant number of people are using social media, so it’s easier virtually to make unlimited friends and sharing feelings with them than meeting physically. This may result in mitigating to feel isolated and improving communication skills when having conversations with different people from several parts of the world. However, one of the major disadvantages of meeting people online is that people sometimes can be victim of crimes and scams. When talking with someone in online who is probably a hacker, anyone can mistakenly share his/her personal details that may result in breaching of privacy and online robberies.
In the end, though an increasing number of organizations and people is using technology instead of meeting in person for getting flexibility and making new friends, it can result in distractions and interruptions during the meeting for professional purposes and individuals can experience scams and crimes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...n past decades. This essay will explore some of the major merits and demerits of using tech...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the least'.
Suggestion: is the least
...se arranging an internal office meeting is least time consuming and all employees, who w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, while, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2219.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53366583541 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04752235289 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516209476309 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 680.4 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.3627418919 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.933333333 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167693918364 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647529028015 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600195453057 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12602770294 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650332900958 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.