Crime is a problem all over the world and there is nothing can be done to prevent it. Agree or disagree?
It is often argued that there is nothing can be done in order to tackle with the problem of crime in all over the world. I totally disagree with this statement because actions from Government and harsh punishment can reduce crime rate.
In order to cope up with this worst problem government should take initiative by providing better infrastructure to the individuals. People tend to do crime to fulfill their basic daily needs because they have no job to do. The employment rate had been increased adversely which directly result into the increase in crime rate. Government should decrease unemployment rate which could result people to not do thefts. On the other hand, government should teach criminals who are under punishment period how to live. To do this government should arrange training session which will helpful for them in the future after punishment. For example, in many foreign countries in the prison criminals have to do jobs like a gardening,cleaning, washing and they also give them meditation sessions to calm their minds and this is making them a wise man.
Small crimes can be reduced by the teaching from the government but bigger crimes can only be reduced by the harsh punishment. If in a nation a harsher punishment can be given to a criminal then the other people will never do that crime again. In addition, if a person commits crime a heavy penalty should be charged by that person then by seeing them the people never do that again. For instance, crime rate in Europe countries is very little because government fullfill all the needs of the citizens and they do not commit any type of crime. Unfortunately, if someone do a crime the Government of these countries gives criminal a worst punishment and set an example for others.
In conclusion, crime can be reduced form all the world with the actions of Government and unbearable punishment.
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...nly be reduced by the harsh punishment. If in a nation a harsher punishment can be...
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...ype of crime. Unfortunately, if someone do a crime the Government of these countri...
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...nment of these countries gives criminal a worst punishment and set an example for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90595611285 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72712499149 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501567398119 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2114032923 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.333333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257200859417 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105988640285 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137923475347 0.0667982634062 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230560697255 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145107725735 0.056905535591 255% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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