Dear Stan,
Trust you and your family are doing great today. I know it has been a while we last saw, but I haven't forgotten all the fun times we spent together in the past.
Recently, I visited a museum in Kenya called "The Done". This museum is the best in the eastern part of Kenya, and it has old historical artifacts that are very popular. Also, I travelled on a flying boat for 5mins to get to my destination. It was an awesome experience!
I saw the 3 eggs belonging to the ancient Cleopatra of Egypt. These eggs where placed in a big rectangular box-like glass. The visitor where allowed to see the eggs once they have reached 80cm away from the glass box containing the artifacts.
To be honest with you, I felt very excited when I saw those eggs because I remembered seeing it in a movie when I was a teenager. I felt like I was the lead actor in that movie as I glanced at those eggs although I felt a bit weird at that point.
All the best.
Adam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Stan, Trust you and your family are doing grea...
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Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
... it has been a while we last saw, but I havent forgotten all the fun times we spent to...
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Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'seeing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: seeing
...x-like glass. The visitor where allowed to see the eggs once they have reached 80cm aw...
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Line 13, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t that point. All the best. Adam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32972972973 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45125450507 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648648648649 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5805433631 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.8181818182 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145843013152 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462850466849 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476575748624 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760398748122 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244118183753 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.