Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Due to the development of technology, more and more people choose to work from home, especially children. There is other reason for their choice, which is base on the reasonable price. In my opinion, this advance case towards to the optimistic side more and bring a lot of benefits. However, nothing is perfect, there still exist the drawbacks. This essay will discuss both positive and negative development and give the examples to prove my ideas.
First, let take a look at the benefits. The decrease of the cost help increase the life quality of human. To articulate, the service about buy and sell old device such as computer, tablets, smartphones, with the cheap price quite popular in this age of machinery. Besides, this faciliate other works like lecturing from household without spending a huge amount of money to open a class, it also help the learner save their time and funds. For instance, most of the work be done through the Internet, this is pointed out in a research carried by the AHUST university.
On the other hand, the easy approach of Internet make many people have deviant thoughts, especially the young. Now, many family let their children use iPad, laptop or somellthing that can watch videos and play games in case their kids wi keep silent. There are many research claim that the basic structure of an individual's personality is quite well established by the age of five and a kid easily to copy the way that the elder act, talk, behavior. Therefore, if they watch a unsuitable content include porn, violent, their behavior will getting worse and worse. The social will get bad either.
To conclude, though there have some pithfalls, our life standard still soar. Therefore, I believe this still a positive development. In addition, the world-ruling power continues investing in the sector as well as instil stricter rules eschewing our children led astray.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, look, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98422712934 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58963061976 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640378548896 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0096354568 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7777777778 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6111111111 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27777777778 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213801453693 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552429147494 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751799503855 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118956054655 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102345549821 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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