The graph below shows the way people of some country invested their money during the years 2001-2006.
The bar graph elucidates the amount of money invested in bonds or stocks in some country in 2001 to 2006.
It is observed from the graph that both investment categories increased over the projected periods but with more preference in investing in stocks than those of bonds.
At the beginning of the period, 100 billions of dollars invested in bonds while 270 billion invested for stocks. Over the next years the level became similar, with both components standing between 120 and 220 billion. However, there was a drastic increase for stock investments in 2004 where 289 billion of money was collected. Meanwhile, the investment on bonds grew from 157 billion to 162 billion from 2003 to 2004. This trend continued until 2005 - there was a fast growth rate for stock market while a steady growth trend for bond market. In 2005, 170 billion of money was gathered in bonds whilst 297 billion of money was recorded for stocks. The amount of money collected in stock market in 2006 was 311 billion compared to 188 billion for bonds.
- The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009. 72
- The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Itlay in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 80
- The bar chart indicates a survey on two different age groups on the factors contributing to make their environment pleasant for working The survey was carried out on two groups of workers those aged from 18 30 and those aged 45 60 and shows factors affect 84
- Question is in the picture. 70
- The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 80
flaws:
Need to catch up the main features. Look:
for stocks: 2001, 2002, 2003 are in the same level; while 2004, 2005, 2006 are in the same level;
for bonds: //2001, 2002; //2003, 2004; //2005, 2006 are in the same level;
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