Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views in regard to how the innovation of artificial intelligence will affect human life. While many people harbor the view that they are scared that technology is too smart to control themselves, I side with those who claim that AI will be an epoch-making event for the step forward in the future.
On the one hand, there are a few reasons why the antagonist object to the convenience of hi-tech. Firstly, the revolution of AI will cause unemployment in which the workforce is replaced by robots. Many people will be homeless due to a greater redundancy in labor which job seekers cannot find a job to make money. Moreover, the unemployed, in society, cause the domino effect; this is because the number of people who lost their job will not have enough ability to pay the living costs and the supplier cannot find the customer either. In terms of coding, there is a likelihood of coder errors to set up the computer which can have many potentially serious risks, which can cause detrimental consequences.
On the other hand, working in difficult situations and performing with high productivity may be two key reasons why the advocate insists that AI will greatly enhance living quality. Thanks to technology, human beings can now utilize robots for various purposes. To be more specific, machines will carry out the discovery of the bottom of the ocean, they are brought into the universe to explore galaxies or even the clearance of radiation in nuclear power plants. In addition, the computer is certainly able to do many jobs better than humans can. In many fields, AI is being developed to be used as a tool to help people improve their creations. For instance, Chat GPT can minimize brain power by making many significant suggestions or there are cars that use sensors and cameras to drive themselves.
In conclusion, artificial intelligence clearly has many drawbacks, however, there are some remarkable benefits that machines give to humans that should be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 707, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ich can cause detrimental consequences. On the other hand, working in difficult ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98507462687 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71102630422 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591044776119 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7098479544 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.285714286 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187416749854 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639322749645 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415584565301 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114932161645 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178233723358 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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