Organized tours to remote places and communities are increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for local people and the environment?
With development of tourism, tend to have trips to remote areas and communities is to have relaxing experiences at weekends or on long holidays. Local people’s living has improved from tourism business. However, it brings many negative effects to the locals and the environment.
Talking to tourism, we have to mention green tourism which has attracted millions of tourists in country and all over the world. Tourism business creates more job opportunities for local people to improve living standards. It means that the locals and travel companies also get money from the spending of travelers. Owners of hotels, restaurants and cafés can make profit from visitors and take resposibility for contributing to development of local government’s budget by taxation. However, mass tourism also puts heavy pressure on the environment. Throwing litter and releasing exhaust fumes from engines of means of transport will cause environmental pollution and health problems to local residents. Also, when a place becomes too crowded and noisy, there are no longer wonderful views and peaceful atmosphere to enjoy.
In conclusion, tour organizations to remote places and communities become common. It brings a wide range of benefits for boosting economy and tourism. It is essential to elevate awareness of protection of environment and natural landscapes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54589371981 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00216574101 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8810319591 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3076923077 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255205085088 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853691120515 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792925926806 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185641351996 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518056035345 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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