There have been heated controversies over the effects of advertising. Some people suggest that advertising achieves success in attracting consumers to buy products, while others argue that advertising is ordinary in daily life and the number of people who care about advertising has declined. From my perspective, I tend to agree that advertising is not as attractive as it used to be.
When advertising first appeared in front of the public, it attracted plenty of sights from the whole society because of its efficiency in convincing customers to purchase the manufactured products. Some of the advertisements were full of imagination and invited beautiful ladies and handsome men as the models and wrote a slogan that was easy to remember to expand their influence. For example, a medicine called Jin Sangzi was popular in China 15 years ago for the company inviting the soccer player Ronaldo to introduce their products.
However, the public pays less attention to advertisements in recent years because of their similar content. It is hard to see innovation in an advertisement, and the companies usually exaggerate the real performance of their products. As a result, advertisements are not reliable anymore, and the public starting to lose interest in them. Take me for instance, there are many advertisements before the video content while using a video website, but I never watch them, I prefer to look at my smartphone and wait for the end of this boring time. It makes no difference to me what content an advertisement has because I don't trust advertising and don't want to waste my time on it.
Although the quantity of advertisements increases every year, I think fewer people are willing to watch them and purchase products from them. There is no doubt that the influence of advertising is decreasing, and individuals don't pay attention to it anymore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12418300654 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05600814515 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584967320261 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2388794403 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.615384615 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226848376519 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816351507222 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700225593715 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14751383246 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587326020001 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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