The table below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009.
The table illustrates the incomes of several school lectures in 2009.
Overall, all countries accept earnings which continues to increase from the first work until final limit. While, in periods to accomplished higher salary, Denmark stay in the lower number than another countries.
In term of Australia, all tutors received first wages of 28.000, after 15 years worked the salaries was raise up became 48.000 and that rate was the higher amount can faculty get, 9 years intensive worked at school will be get a larger number from the allowance. Moreover, Denmark have the most bigger sallary than Australia with the rate 45.000 since the first day worked, and 15 years letter every person who still stay with the same job will be pay rise was 54.000 and this number was the maximum sallary that can acceptabe with minimum time of worked around 8 years.
On the other hand, Luxemburg being the highest country that channelled funds to pay teachers' wages of 80.000 since the starting working, the figure will continue to increase after 15 years of work where it will get a salary of 119.000 with a maximum salary of 132.000, whereas to get that salary you have to spend 30 years teaching. Furthermore, Japan and Korea have a nice sallary to distributed for teachers calculated when do teaching at class both of them will get the big amount (34.000 and 30.000 respectively), Japan will give 65.000 if the faculty was teaching 15 years with the maximum income of 86.000 and should be waste the time around 37 years for stay at school. This case opposed to Korea that offer 48.000 for teachers was teaching 15 years and 62.000 for the biggest earnings with mass devotion during 34 years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s the incomes of several school lectures in 2009. Overall, all countries accept ...
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Line 2, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in 2009. Overall, all countries accept earnings which continues to increase fro...
^^
Line 2, column 164, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Denmark) must be used with a third-person verb: 'stays'.
Suggestion: stays
... to accomplished higher salary, Denmark stay in the lower number than another countr...
^^^^
Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ger number from the allowance. Moreover, Denmark have the most bigger sallary tha...
^^
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Denmark) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... from the allowance. Moreover, Denmark have the most bigger sallary than Australia ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'bigger' (without 'most') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: bigger
... allowance. Moreover, Denmark have the most bigger sallary than Australia with the rate 45...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 538, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...000 respectively, Japan will give 65.000 if the faculty was teaching 15 years wit...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, whereas, while, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 965.302439024 145% => OK
No of words: 290.0 196.424390244 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81379310345 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2830607155 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 106.607317073 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544827586207 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 283.868780488 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.792249244 43.030603864 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 174.5 112.824112599 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.25 22.9334400587 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 5.23603664747 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0876665445823 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570611281437 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741401794638 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856048233261 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909630083064 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s the incomes of several school lectures in 2009. Overall, all countries accept ...
^^
Line 2, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in 2009. Overall, all countries accept earnings which continues to increase fro...
^^
Line 2, column 164, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Denmark) must be used with a third-person verb: 'stays'.
Suggestion: stays
... to accomplished higher salary, Denmark stay in the lower number than another countr...
^^^^
Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ger number from the allowance. Moreover, Denmark have the most bigger sallary tha...
^^
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Denmark) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... from the allowance. Moreover, Denmark have the most bigger sallary than Australia ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'bigger' (without 'most') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: bigger
... allowance. Moreover, Denmark have the most bigger sallary than Australia with the rate 45...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 538, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...000 respectively, Japan will give 65.000 if the faculty was teaching 15 years wit...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, whereas, while, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 965.302439024 145% => OK
No of words: 290.0 196.424390244 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81379310345 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2830607155 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 106.607317073 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544827586207 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 283.868780488 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.792249244 43.030603864 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 174.5 112.824112599 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.25 22.9334400587 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 5.23603664747 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0876665445823 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570611281437 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741401794638 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856048233261 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909630083064 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.