Nowaday's ever-changing world doubled with the proliferation of technology information are making a suitable way for many factors.and those affecting directly people life's aspects, especially in the massive development of road infrastructure. Some people argued that Road systems are just safe when budgets put in true situation allocating on roads and motorways than on public transport systems, whlist, others have the contrast opinions as their counterparts. I will write down my ides about this notion .
On the one hand, better public transport systems will have a positive impacts in major cities and people who do not have a private vehicle. There would be less people on street during the peak hours because trains or buses are able to carry hundred of passengers at the same time. Secondly, public transportation systems also reduce the quantity of pollutants, which release on the environment thousand of tonnes per year in developed countries all over the world. With the invention from renewable and alternative sources to apply for public driving systems will have the advantageous impacts to ensure the people's safety.
On the other hand, I would strongly side with those who think that allocating budget in roads and motorways infrastructure. Better road quality increases the level of road safety and also adequate transport infrastructure. As far as we know, traffic congestion was took place in rush hours because exceeds the capacity of vehices on roads, although expensive and time-consuming, is believed a permanent solution for all modes of commuting to circulate smoothly.Also, expanding roads and motorways can reduce the most effectively traffice accidents and vehicle's congestion.And private cars are becoming astonishing dramatically owing to the enhancement of living standards , so it's too difficult for government to resort to public transport systems. Therefore, types of public transportation are able to be suitable with a part of citizens to operate.
In conclusion, I hold fast to the belief that the investment on roads and motorways is better and more permanent than other terms of allocations. And i hope that the goverment can combine all the aforementioned ideas the most efficiently to promote the high quality of life and modern infrastructure .
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- Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to have a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion What sort of punishment should parents and t 84
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 506, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ill write down my ides about this notion . On the one hand, better public trans...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...write down my ides about this notion . On the one hand, better public transport...
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Line 2, column 157, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... have a private vehicle. There would be less people on street during the peak hours ...
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Line 2, column 243, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...cause trains or buses are able to carry hundred of passengers at the same time. Secondl...
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Line 2, column 396, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...tants, which release on the environment thousand of tonnes per year in developed countri...
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Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
... far as we know, traffic congestion was took place in rush hours because exceeds the...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...odes of commuting to circulate smoothly.Also, expanding roads and motorways can redu...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...ffice accidents and vehicles congestion.And private cars are becoming astonishing d...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...g to the enhancement of living standards , so its too difficult for government to ...
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Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nt than other terms of allocations. And i hope that the goverment can combine all...
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Line 4, column 300, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...uality of life and modern infrastructure .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44225352113 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13581544977 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594366197183 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.279448503 49.4020404114 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.615384615 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3076923077 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264070041803 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901417540469 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667734725282 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150005419303 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346036578593 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 506, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ill write down my ides about this notion . On the one hand, better public trans...
^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...write down my ides about this notion . On the one hand, better public transport...
^^
Line 2, column 157, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... have a private vehicle. There would be less people on street during the peak hours ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 243, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...cause trains or buses are able to carry hundred of passengers at the same time. Secondl...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 396, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...tants, which release on the environment thousand of tonnes per year in developed countri...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
... far as we know, traffic congestion was took place in rush hours because exceeds the...
^^^^
Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...odes of commuting to circulate smoothly.Also, expanding roads and motorways can redu...
^^^^
Line 3, column 573, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...ffice accidents and vehicles congestion.And private cars are becoming astonishing d...
^^^
Line 3, column 672, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...g to the enhancement of living standards , so its too difficult for government to ...
^^
Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nt than other terms of allocations. And i hope that the goverment can combine all...
^
Line 4, column 300, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...uality of life and modern infrastructure .
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44225352113 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13581544977 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594366197183 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.279448503 49.4020404114 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.615384615 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3076923077 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264070041803 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901417540469 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667734725282 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150005419303 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346036578593 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.