Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
Nowadays, it is a tendency to take care of our environment. That’s why there are people who believe that household waste isn’t recycle enough and in order to do it more conscious just laws will help. I tent to agree with this statement, we observe that because of the rules of using different kind of bins for different kind of rubbish, we separate and help the authorities to recycle.
On the one hand, because of the over-packaging, we have more rubbish than it was in the past, and there are still many people who don’t know how to recycle and what it is recyclable. For example, glass is a recyclable kind of rubbish but many doesn’t know that it has to be thrown in special marked bins for glass, by colours, so it could be reused. it doesn’t matter how many laws the authorities will apply, it won’t be nothing changed if people won’t care. it may be hard to recycle, but people have to understand, that’s our planet, and just with an education from early age and with the example of parents, it is going to work for now on.
On the other hand, governments have to improve their waste management, in order to keep as much as possible the country free from pollution. So that can be achieved by improving the laws, people who don’t recycle have to be punished until they will do that consciously.
This essay argued why people don’t recycle enough of garbage from their homes and why some people believe that just laws will help to improve the amount of recycled rubbish. And I completely agree, unfortunately not all people are considering their responsibilities, but with some regulations and a good management of waste, we will live in a country with more fresh air and less environmental damages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
...ass, by colours, so it could be reused. it doesn’t matter how many laws the author...
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Line 2, column 423, Rule ID: NOT_NOTHING[1]
Message: Double negation. You probably should say 'anything'.
Suggestion: anything
...the authorities will apply, it won’t be nothing changed if people won’t care. it may be...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...e nothing changed if people won’t care. it may be hard to recycle, but people have...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arents, it is going to work for now on. On the other hand, governments have to i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h air and less environmental damages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, as to, for example, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72697368421 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70199979483 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509868421053 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.0058616032 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.636363636 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6363636364 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281261529622 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111006468641 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867722180662 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180923637086 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396963849564 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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