Claim: In any field - business, politics, education,government - those in power should step down after five years.
I agree with the statement that in fields like bussiness,politics,education,government the people in power should step down after five years. It is important for the overall development and to avoid the possibilitie that someone become the absolute ruler of any of this. Since they are the primary sectors that affect everyone on daily basis we should take actions and precaution to not let that happen that someone would become the only ruler of this sectors.
Goverment is the field which runs the entire country. Goverments and its dicision, policies , rules, their work done are the things which affect every commonman in th country direct or indirect. It is important that the people in the government position shold change in every 5 years for the development of the country and most importantly to avoid the posibility of becoming the only rules. It is possible that if a person who is on a high position in the government would become same for many election than he would eleminate all his opponents in that time and no one will stand against it and he will become the king of the country and can do anything as he want because there is no opposition so no restriction on him, this is how the people of country might loss their independence and the nation will become democratic in name only and become like old days where king rule on people and no one can go against the king. So since the government elected person is good in work we should step him down after few years. The change in the government people will also provide new ideas to take the nation forward, to develope the nation and strengthen the economy also.
Education is the field which affect every human being from the chieldhood. It is important to have the changes in the education system and policies according to the worlds need and the advancements in the morden world. If there is no change in the people who are in power the nation whould not get the new ideas as every human being has different ideas , every human being think in different way so if the people who are in power will remain same we get the new ideas in the begining but latter on we would see no new development in that field so to do progress , get new strategies and ideas it is important to step down the people in power because this is the field which reqires the changes according the morden world and the worlds needs to inline the nation with the worlds because today's kids are the future of tommorw's world's.
Bussiness is the fields which connects to all the fields ranging from politics, educaton, health etc. If some are in power in bussiness they are well connected to all the sectors.If some are the in power in their field of bussines and they are on that much height that no one can touch them than they have no compititors , in this kind of situation the people have to reply on that bussiness only to fullfill their requirement by this we have to pay the money thay ask for the product whether that is resonable or not
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , politics
... statement that in fields like bussiness,politics,education,government the people in powe...
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Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , government
...fields like bussiness,politics,education,government the people in power should step down af...
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Line 1, column 256, Rule ID: OF_ANY_OF[1]
Message: Consider simply using 'of' instead.
Suggestion: of
... that someone become the absolute ruler of any of this. Since they are the primary sector...
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Line 1, column 448, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... someone would become the only ruler of this sectors. Goverment is the field whic...
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Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y. Goverments and its dicision, policies , rules, their work done are the things w...
^^
Line 3, column 491, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun election seems to be countable; consider using: 'many elections'.
Suggestion: many elections
...in the government would become same for many election than he would eleminate all his opponen...
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Line 3, column 662, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...f the country and can do anything as he want because there is no opposition so no re...
^^^^
Line 3, column 1164, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...e the nation and strengthen the economy also. Education is the field which affect...
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Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...as every human being has different ideas , every human being think in different wa...
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Line 5, column 562, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...elopment in that field so to do progress , get new strategies and ideas it is impo...
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Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...y are well connected to all the sectors.If some are the in power in their field of...
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Line 7, column 321, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...touch them than they have no compititors , in this kind of situation the people ha...
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Line 7, column 466, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (thay) must be used with a third-person verb: 'asks'.
Suggestion: asks
...t by this we have to pay the money thay ask for the product whether that is resonab...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2456.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 536.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58208955224 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78645311959 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.401119402985 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 774.0 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 23.0359550562 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 169.579311407 60.3974514979 281% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.428571429 118.986275619 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.2857142857 23.4991977007 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177915355804 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791376800639 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857466567348 0.0758088955206 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1178886304 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542794831704 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 14.1392134831 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.83 48.8420337079 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.2143820225 153% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.