As the number of cars increases more money has to be spent on road systems Some people think the government should pay for this Others however think that drivers should cover the costs Discuss both views and give your opinion | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that drivers should cover the costs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

We have moved into a time where everyone needs cars, it is necessary technology for making movement more easier for people, especially over long distances.

Tho for cars also necessary smooth roads, without small holes or uneven surfaces, with smooth roads people can use cars longer and careful, without danger or fear to get into a car accident. But for those kind of roads also need money.

In my opinion, the government should provide population of their country with good roads to drive on. The government should pay more attention not only to big or central roads , but also on country roads.
As the population increases, use of cars is also increasing, especially in large cities, where it is difficult to simply walk somewhere. First of all it is government's exact duty to build, safe, smooth road systems for people.

I can't agree with the others who think that drivers should cover the costs, for building roads, there million of people who can just use any road to get somewhere. Everyone even at least once in a life used a car to reach their desired destination, it is quite ridiculous to force drivers to pay for building roads. It turns out that even if a person, who does not have a car, but got somewhere by a cab, he has to pay for road built and for his own trip to a location he needed. It does not make any sense, since everyone uses roads, not only drivers.

From my point of view, government should pay all costs for the construction of roads, taking into account convenience of use.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ecessary technology for making movement more easier for people, especially over long distan...
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Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'those kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; those kinds
...ear to get into a car accident. But for those kind of roads also need money. In my opi...
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Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hould pay more attention not only to big or central roads , but also on country r...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ention not only to big or central roads , but also on country roads. As the pop...
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Line 8, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
..., smooth road systems for people. I cant agree with the others who think that dr...
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Line 8, column 103, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...er the costs, for building roads, there million of people who can just use any road to ...
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Line 8, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...any road to get somewhere. Everyone even at least once in a life used a car to re...
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Line 8, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...once in a life used a car to reach their desired destination, it is quite ridicul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, as to, at least, kind of, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65055762082 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44366149077 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576208178439 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.473887367 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277016917947 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106815268661 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602490027808 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138917511392 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517632285089 0.056905535591 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, as to, at least, kind of, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments