As reading is important for a good education, we should encourage our children to read whatever appeals to them. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Many important things in the world to encourage youngster ability. One of the best methods by reading a book, because book have a million impact to improve intelligence of children and helpful to the future. I completely agree with this notion and think that source of knowledge derived from some book.
First of all, developing ability of cognitive in child self. In other words, book play a vital role to establish thinking ability of youngster. They will become quality Human Resources as a result will changes national development. For instance, parents with strict education generating gifted children such as Japan it is always educate their children by bought book, provided book and always controlled them to read a book everyday. Thus, majority of children in there have above average intelligence.
Secondly, habitual with different condition. This habit made children have high soul to solve each problem it occured. Moreover, their critical thinking will increase and have a lot of solution with the best way even in bad situation they can hold the situation. For example, Maudy Ayunda as eminent influencer in Indonesia, since she child, her parents never gived her toys but replace it with some books and as a result she can cope all situation and stay calm whatever the condition it is. Thats why books have big impact to help children determine their future and as a parents should direct them to the right way.
To conclude, it is fact if book have own way to creating the children with best knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'change'
Suggestion: change
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'educated'.
Suggestion: educated
...ted children such as Japan it is always educate their children by bought book, provided...
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Line 2, column 425, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...d always controlled them to read a book everyday. Thus, majority of children in there ha...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...stay calm whatever the condition it is. Thats why books have big impact to help child...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a parent' or simply 'parents'?
Suggestion: a parent; parents
... children determine their future and as a parents should direct them to the right way. T...
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Line 4, column 71, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the best'.
Suggestion: with the best
...k have own way to creating the children with best knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99606299213 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56475742634 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622047244094 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.53244867 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6428571429 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181110280587 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583766909843 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046191883261 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112127781388 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030968846356 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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