Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is critically important that people should contribute their time and effort to help the communities. There is no shortage of opinions that the younger generation do not pay attention to help society. But I have a different belief. I would go in favor of the statement that youth plays an important role in helping a community. I prefer this because of two reasons which I will elaborate in the following paragraphs. First of all, young people are more educated nowadays and they support the population because they have extensive knowledge about technology. In contrast, the younger people in the past were not smart enough and did not know much about technical information. So, with the help of technological sources like the internet they serve the human population in different ways. This is best exemplified by my personal experience. My cousin is a doctor by profession. He also knows how to use social media efficiently. Recently he started his own channel on you tube where he provides healthy tips and remedies to the people with no charge. If my cousin had no awareness about the internet then he would not have been able to provide useful information to the public. Secondly, young adults are more enthusiastic these days and they want to participate in different kinds of volunteering services. However, in the past the younger adults did not have these kinds of services available. Hence, the young people take more time to be a part of these programs. As a result, the people in our societies can get more benefits. For instance, about ten years ago, when I was studying psychology in my college, I got a chance to take part in counseling people about their personal problems. I was so excited and I tried my best to provide excellent services to the public. That really boosted my confidence and I also felt peace in my heart. In conclusion, I have a firm belief that young people in a human population take the time out of their busy lives to help others in a community. This is because they are more informed of technological methods and also because they want to provide social services to people in need.
- Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information Others think access to much information creates problems Which view do you agree with 76
- Wild tuna a species of large ocean fish have decreased in number because of overfishing Recently attempts have been made to farm tuna by feeding the fish in ocean cages until they become large enough for sale However tuna farming has faced several problem 75
- Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole 83
- Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past 70
- Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1053, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77717391304 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76612282654 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510869565217 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8856079718 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9090909091 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68181818182 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16531615239 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465033325516 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315275853916 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16531615239 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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