With a growth surge of global industrialization and latter-day technologies, Human beings all over the world have a good condition as well as an expanded job opportunity. Nevertheless, This promotion have to be associated with responsibility into protecting the environment. While some residents claim that the major environment problem of our time is the attributable to the disappearance of personalized species of biodiversity, Others hold a stern belief that there are more significant environment problems. I would write up my own opinion to be my clarification.
On the one hand, Lack of particular species of plants and animals are just a certainly justified notion to become the environment more concerned. The exploitation of natural resources as well as carry out some industrialize constructions bring species with many disadvantageous impacts. The deforestation or cutting down trees too much can be the primary reasons that can lead to the loss of habitat, so more and more endangered species are on the verge of extinction, others are brought out and adopted by wildife sanctuaries,simultaneously, it also damages ecological system and the imbalance of biodiversity. Because of these negative actions, it is also a underlying reason but not really clear about the pollution of natural environment.
On the other hand, I would completely side with those who think that The environmental issues ascribe from many factors. In terms of nature, The competition between species for survival in the environment, leads to be disproportionate of food resources that are already redundant , now becoming more and more depleted, organisms are less diverse, the environment is no longer healthy. clean and has an abundance and diversity of creatures. In terms of human actions, it seem to be the main contributors to this crisis. The deforestation, wildlife hunting, throwing away the rubbish anywhere they want and other negative activities that could be result in more serious problems, their health as well as Earth's lifespan will be shortened. Businessmans are just aware of immediate benefits that quit their lifetime.
By these aforementioned radical reasons, the loss of specie's habitats or can appear as other factors, which combine to form a potential hazard to our living envitonment, We have to join hands together to protect the environment, take actions to contribute to bringing the environment back to its green features.
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 84
- Nowadays some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experience or personal qualities when they look for new employees Why is it the case Is it a positive or negative development 84
- Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which causes many health problems Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar Do you agree or disagree 73
- Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies How does competitiveness affect individuals Is it a positive or negative trend 84
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organisation Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 527, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , simultaneously
...t out and adopted by wildife sanctuaries,simultaneously, it also damages ecological system and ...
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Line 2, column 659, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e of these negative actions, it is also a underlying reason but not really clear ...
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Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ood resources that are already redundant , now becoming more and more depleted, or...
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Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Clean
..., the environment is no longer healthy. clean and has an abundance and diversity of c...
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Line 3, column 471, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seems'?
Suggestion: seems
...reatures. In terms of human actions, it seem to be the main contributors to this cri...
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Line 3, column 538, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...utors to this crisis. The deforestation, wildlife hunting, throwing away the rubb...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, really, so, well, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2061.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42368421053 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47504975772 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.4475692094 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.4 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223695853984 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640743655601 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475624056868 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12968363387 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226268425784 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.