The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.
The presented diagram illustrates the transformation of how sugar is made from sugar cane.
Overall, the procedure consists of 7 main steps, starting with raw materials and finishing with refined sweet substances.
Firstly, it takes around one to one and a haft years to grow sugar cane, right from sowing to the ripening of sugar cane. After that, the crop is harvested either with the help of machines or by farmers themselves. The usage of machinery might be efficient but when farmers harvest it, they remove every single leaf and then cut the canes. Then, raw plants are crushed and squeezed by a strong and giant roller to extract the juice. From this, the juice is purified through a tool called a limestone filter to get pure and refined products.
Following this step is that, the fresh liquor pouring into the evaporator for making syrup through heating. Next, it is time to separate by centrifuge to remove an excessive amount of sugar crystal grains from the syrup. Ultimately, the crystals are dried out and cooled down to be ready for people’s consumption.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95604395604 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55203071408 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664835164835 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 12.6649121592 43.030603864 29% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.2 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276843023823 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960048139539 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127076547049 0.0843802449381 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17384599666 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140557423294 0.0819641961636 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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