These days, there are some differences in lifestyle compared to life in the past. Those changes should be beneficial.
In lately years, people tend to live in nuclear families rather than extended families. One of the main reasons is that they prefer self-freedom. When people stay in extended families, they must care about emotions, habit of other members. By contrast, living in nuclear families, people would enhance connection to their children and feel more comfortable. The changes are seen in family roles, too. Before, the father usually went to work and the mother took care their children and chores. But, now, both parents have job or the husband stay at home while the wife go to work. These changes fit with gender equality social and support couple in understanding together.
Those changes would lead many advantages for people in their life such as avoiding unnecessary conflict or sharing burden of life. For example, few years ago, my friend’s family, in which she lived with her parent and her children. She told me that they usually argue with her parent about teaching her children. Her parent did not agree with the way she punished the children and my friend claimed that her parent were old fashioned. Then, she decided to live in another house with her children. They visited to her parent only once a month. Following this, there is no conflict happen after she did it. Moreover, they cherished meeting span rather than before and always be happy when staying together. About sharing burden of life, it is clear that two people works get more income than one. For instance, my sister’s family, when they had one child, only her husband went to work, every things were good. But, when second child was born, her family usually lacked money, although her husband worked very hard. She worried very much. She told my parent that she wondered that if she also went to work to earn money for her own family, who care her children. Then, she dedicated to went to work, because my parent helped her to take care her children. From that, her family life became better and she also was happier.
In conclusion, I claim that the changes in family structure and family roles appropriate with modern life as well as bring many benefits to people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 521, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...and chores. But, now, both parents have job or the husband stay at home while the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 24.0651302605 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85309278351 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26931050473 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546391752577 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 5.43587174349 350% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2635611932 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4230769231 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116777715566 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453891860765 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827775579757 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145512672928 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101012151954 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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