The government should sometimes infringe on people's freedom for the security of society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a common belief that the idea of violation, the freedom of people, is not morality. However, I firmly believe that sometimes, the government need to interfere the people's liberty for the security of society because of a protecting a citizen from danger and making sure that safety regulations are followed.
To begin with protecting people from danger because the laws of a country are enforced by the country's government which prohibit and reduce activities damage for people. For example, nowadays, traffic regulations are promulgated to prevent the accident and reduce the number of dead.
On the top of that, the government can infringe an individual's right to freedom in order to make sure that safety regulations are followed. Certain jobs can endanger people's lives when employees do not work safely and responsibly. It is important to ensure that these employees follow safety rules. For instance, school bus drivers or pilots who effect immediately to people's lives. Thus, they have to undergo the random healthy test to ensure their ability.
To sum up,the infringement of government which protects people from danger and make sure that safety regulations are followed. For those reasons, the government should sometimes infringe on people's freedom for the security of society.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...s, the government need to interfere the peoples liberty for the security of society bec...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...op of that, the government can infringe an individuals right to freedom in order to make sure ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...test to ensure their ability. To sum up,the infringement of government which protec...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, thus, for example, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29611650485 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74154971232 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563106796117 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0439299858 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1818181818 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292552320382 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109846808289 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122483312737 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190809134957 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103852332845 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...s, the government need to interfere the peoples liberty for the security of society bec...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...op of that, the government can infringe an individuals right to freedom in order to make sure ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...test to ensure their ability. To sum up,the infringement of government which protec...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, thus, for example, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29611650485 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74154971232 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563106796117 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0439299858 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1818181818 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292552320382 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109846808289 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122483312737 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190809134957 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103852332845 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.