Today different kinds of advertising influence our life. Do the negative effect of this development outweigh the positive?
Nowadays advertisement are extremely popular in every part of the world due to this competitive era. Some source of advertisement have a great impact on humanity. Whereas, some types of advertisements are inappropriate for the human society. However, I will discuss both merits and demerits of this phenomenon in subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, there are ample of drawbacks which directly influence people. The most remarkable reason behind this problem is juveniles, they do not have a knowledge related that product or service and their after effects. Children easily attract toward that product because of advertising show on T.V, social media or see a banner in the city. Moreover, they demand that things from their parents and some time parents have limited budget for running their other household services. That time they face lost of difficulties to manage all things to due to these attractive advertisements.
On the other hand, there are some good impact on people from the advertising, through this they can get the knowledge related the product or service. The most important reason is it is creat the job opportunity for the people, who have good command on this field. Apart from that, normal people up date their self about the new product and services and sometimes it is beneficial to purchase some things with good discounts. Last but far from the least, companies generate a great income from the advertising and people also have different options availability, they can purchase according to their needs and budget.
Therefore on the basis of the all the points till discuss and by my personal experience as well. I would like to sate in conclusion that advertisement is very useful for the human society and it is good for the change.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, apart from, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10652920962 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77801843527 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570446735395 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9149262453 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102158439713 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374579297783 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262941322265 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636591068189 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030306421696 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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