The diagram below shows the process of recycling plastic bottles Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The diagram below shows the process of recycling plastic bottles.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given diagram illustrates the process by which plastic bottles are recycled.

Overall, this process comprises nine stages, which begin with throwing, then collecting and sorting, and it includes a number of steps to recycle the plastic. Finally, it ends with producing end products from recycled plastic materials.

It is evident from the diagram that after using plastic bottles, individuals throw their plastic trash into a public rubbish area. Accordingly, plastic items are collected and transported by a vehicle to a recycling centre in order to be sorted. Turning to the diagram, it can be seen that bottles which match the standard, are compressed into huge square blocks in the fourth stage.

Next, these blocks are crushed by a machine. The micros are washed carefully and are sent to produce plastic pellets respectively in the fifth and sixth steps. These pellets then be heated and become raw materials. Subsequently, from such materials, workers create daily products such as plastic boxes, water bottles and plastic bags. Additionally, the process will start over from the first step.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, finally, first, if, so, then, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35428571429 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61611957537 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6753034006 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1818181818 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188786247105 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729794756337 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553627450452 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136104390636 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474753005471 0.0819641961636 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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