The line graph illustrates how much oil cost over the world for each year between 1970 and 2005, while the bar chart depicts how much oil the top six countries export each day.
Overall, the world oil price witnessed an increase over the period and hit its highest proportion during the next ten years. Meanwhile, Saudi Arabia and Russia exported the largest amount of oil in 2005.
Regarding the first chart, the average global oil price began at just under 15 US dollars per barrel and rose markedly to about 45 US dollars between 1970 and 1975. Next, the figure witnessed almost an unchanged for the next three years but later increased significantly to reach its peak of over 80 US dollars in 1980. In contrast, the price decreased dramatically to under 30 US dollars per barrel in 1986, followed by a small fluctuation of about 22 US dollars for the next fifteen years. There was a slight fall to under 30 US dollars before a steady growth to about 55 US dollars by the final year.
Turning to the bar graph, in 2005, Saudi Arabia exported the largest proportion of oil, at over 9 million barrels each day, followed by Russia at under 7 million per barrel. The amount of oil-exporting in Norway and Iran was almost the same, with about 2.7 million barrels. Finally, the two countries which had the least amount of oil were the United Arab Emirates and Nigeria, at 2.5 and 2.4 million barrels per day respectively.
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use 73
- The pie charts give information about the number of sick days the population of an imaginary country took for three dififerent years The line graph shows the amount of money spent on healthcare per person per year from 1970 until 1990 84
- The first line graph shows the average world oil price for each year from 1970 to 2005 The second chart shows the top seven oil exporting countries and how much they export each day 73
- The line graph shows the size of the global population from 1400 to 2000 and the pie charts show the global population by region in 1900 and 2000 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 82
- The line graph shows the size of the global population from 1400 to 2000 and the pie charts show the global population by region in 1900 and 2000 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, regarding, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 252.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64285714286 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38832192819 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539682539683 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1547884928 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317851941647 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137883191952 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146619660704 0.0843802449381 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245027152582 0.15604864568 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.181720088406 0.0819641961636 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, regarding, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 252.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64285714286 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38832192819 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539682539683 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1547884928 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317851941647 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137883191952 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146619660704 0.0843802449381 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245027152582 0.15604864568 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.181720088406 0.0819641961636 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.