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School uniforms should be banned, allowing students to freely wear their own clothes. Do you agree or disagree about this topic?

Nowadays, many people argue that it is probably essential to ban students from wearing school uniforms. In my opinion, I completely agree with this point of view because school uniforms can be uncomfortable. Moreover, students should be allowed to show their personality.
First of all, it is worth considering that numerous of students might be disagreeable when they have to wear uniforms. To suitable for with student's family economic conditions, uniforms must be reasonable price. Therefore its material quality is only guaranteed to be average that may be not breathable for students after they participate activities. Moreover in Vietnam, school-girl: are forced to wear "Ao dai" when they go to school. However, it is not appropriate for weather in there because they might find it is difficult to do exercise under high temperature.
In addition to this school uniforms can cause body shaming due to fit of it. For instance, school have students to wear uniforms though. Some of them are overweight it leads to the fact that they can become the topic of negative discussion. Furthermore, forbidding school uniform brings opportunities for students to express themself. They are at the age of needing to show their sense of style through clothes and accessories. To illustrate several students belong to LGBT community consequently, they desire to freely. wear their own clothes. to be true their gender. I game lesbian students wish for wear jeans and T- shirt instead of uniform skirt, school ought to encourage them to be themself. As a result when they satisfy with their desire to express their personality, they might concentrate on their study.
In conclusion, I completely agree the viewpoint of banning. school uniform to make condition for student to wear. what they want. It clear that freely wearing their own clothes helps them to be comfortable and show their sense of style This maybe has resulted in creating a wonderful educational environment for student to develop comprehensively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25696594427 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94460937022 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547987616099 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8205629304 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1818181818 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6818181818 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22727272727 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423758693967 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127164599986 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734667481358 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282445677636 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630696583437 0.056905535591 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments