Nowadays, the greatest way to stop people from smoking is to increase prices of cigarette materials. It is undeniable that money is very important in human life, so there are some people who can not spend more money on smoking. As a result, the figure of addiction will be decrease in the future. Therefore, that is the long-term solution to fall the number of smokers.
On the one hand, many people are disagree with the opinion because they believe that the addiction will be do anything for cigarette, it may be against to the law. For instance, the person who is addicted the cigarette can be use forms suggest that smuggle, illegal prosession or pillage to have money to buy tobacco products. Consequently, society will appear more evils and inhabitant’s live gradually become pernicious. Alternatively, many people believe that instead of increasing taxes on cigarette materials, the government should have a laws on tobacco use.
On the other hand, smoking has a bad impact on human health, so accrete the tobacco products will reduce the number of people getting sick from cigarette. Actually, in cigarettes have contain amount of nicotine, it affects many different harms of the users, and people around. For example, smoking is the first reason which lead to the lung cancer and making many people live in a life full of sickness and regret. As a result, rising the high of tobacco materials will decrease the percentage of disease and the medical expense.
In conclusion, I believe that increasing the taxes on cigarette products is the best method to reduce the number of addiction and fewer get sick from smoking.
- The best way to prevent people from smoking is to impose high taxes on tobacco products In this way people will be less likely to develop a long term addiction to smoking To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- The best way to prevent people from smoking is to impose high taxes on tobacco products In this way people will be less likely to develop a long term addiction to smoking To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 543, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a law' or simply 'laws'?
Suggestion: a law; laws
...e materials, the government should have a laws on tobacco use. On the other hand, s...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'contained'.
Suggestion: contained
...cigarette. Actually, in cigarettes have contain amount of nicotine, it affects many dif...
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Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... contain amount of nicotine, it affects many different harms of the users, and people around. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, consequently, first, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00732600733 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67772833543 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534798534799 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.301171122 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.153846154 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305157625342 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102712771171 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056436622233 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177934480752 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392627526239 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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