Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life.
Why do you think that is the case?
What is the most important thing to succeed in life?
In fast-paced world, everyone wants to be successful in their life, they want to live luxurious lifestyle and want to be powerful leader. It is undoubtedly that people who fails in academy, also become most successful in their career. While education is not necessary to achieve success, being successful also require higher amount of abilities and strengths. This essay will discuss essential perspectives of successful life.
To begin with, education do not teach you the life lessons. To explain that individuals who have less patience in life can not survive in some of the situation, they struggle in their life. Institutes only teach you the principles and ethics of the life, which sometimes do not work in real life situation. If someone has high grades in university, that does not mean that they can easily be successful in their life. Nevertheless, every person requires enough courage and attitude to be successful life, which may not have during the school time. Also, they can only understand or capture the concept of theoretical interpretation, practically they can not use this concept during academic life. Therefore, person only understand the real situation when he faces life’s problem.
In addition, if individual has higher standard or goals set into mind, they will not understand the concept of theoretical information. Even though they are failed in school, but that does not mean they can not be businessmen or celebrity in their career. Education is not only important in their life, but the key to success is significant for them. They may have higher will power or better leadership skills which will automatically allow them to deal any difficult situations in life, and because they also receive team support from team member to reach top level. As all these positive perspectives are important, may be the high courage and patience also the key to success for them.
In conclusion, to reiterate that education is not only important in life. If person has high mental power and strength, they will easily cooperate with the situations and can become great leader and influencer in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ess patience in life can not survive in some of the situation, they struggle in their life....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14409221902 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75736641344 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489913544669 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5684004576 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2777777778 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279417242948 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110138966651 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539008363928 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179153699841 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617465259679 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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