It is very important that children should study hard at school. Time spent studying on the Internet is time wasted. Do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.
These days, the Internet is being known as one of the most useful tools in our daily lives. Despite this fact, it is still argued that students should only focus on learning classroom and time spent studying on the Internet is a waste. In my experience, Internet is actually a beneficial tool instead of a harmful factor to learners for its endless sources and flexibility.
To begin with, Internet has been bound to be a great help for learners ever since the day it was invented. With its abundant studying materials, learners can greatly enhanced their knowledge. Furthermore, studying online also offers schoolers with more opportunities on carrying out their knowledge into practice or even making in-depth research. They now have the chances to look back on what they have learnt and analyse what they have not understood in their learning progress.
Subsequently, studying online is undoubtedly flexible. Students nowadays can gain knowledge in any positions with the help of the Internet. It is now unnecessary to travel long distances just to gain knowledge from in-class lessons. Learners do not only benefit from time and space factors but also in the terms of receiving an gigantic database. Moreover, many websites and apps are designed with a view to reducing stresses and making the lessons more attractive. Students can now acquire knowledge in a much less boring way without being stressed.
To conclude, the Internet is unquestionably helpful in our daily lives as it serves the purpose of education with a giant amount of knowledge. I strongly agree that studying online is as important as learning classroom, and should not be considered as a waste of time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 326, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...tors but also in the terms of receiving an gigantic database. Moreover, many websi...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s boring way without being stressed. To conclude, the Internet is unquestiona...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, look, moreover, so, still, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11231884058 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78172870672 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590579710145 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6445694888 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.0666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160095193357 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580298732034 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799408208478 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113889777382 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064127383399 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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