Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?
There are a variety of perspectives that young people ought to engage in volunteer work in their free time to support the local community. Some people believe that this can be beneficial both to the individual and society as a whole. However, in my viewpoint, I do not agree that youngsters have to do unpaid work.
To begin with, it is a considerable fact that students taking part in voluntary work can be negatively influenced on their performance at school. To be more exact, on a daily basis, young people are always under pressure due to hectic schedules at school where they are required to concentrate on their lessons, as well as finish a lot of homeworks and deadlines when they come back home. As a consequence, students can be neglected from their lessons at school, which plays a fundamental role for their ambitions in the future, leading to disappointed performance in class. In addition, it is understandable that at an early age, youngsters need to spend time on entertainment that contributes to their development in terms of physical and mental health.
Moreover, it is the fact that results created by teenagers in unpaid jobs do not have good quality compared to those which are made by adults. To clarify, students have little experience as well as specialized knowledge to work effectively in social tasks which expect a huge amount of skills for contribution to community development. For that reason, teenagers ought to focus on studying and improve their survival skills in class instead of working on a volunteer basis.
In conclusion, even though some people say that teenagers who work in unpaid jobs will not only have a chance to benefit themselves, but also contribute to improve the quality of communication, I still personally argue that students do not have to join in volunteer work obligatorily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98697068404 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97411796501 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553745928339 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.327246778 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.181818182 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9090909091 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332271977049 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126281219649 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821835383109 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209917029564 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122094673946 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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