It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In this day and age, it is argue that only people who are born with certain flairs for sport and music or others field can be success in these are while others think different. They said that every now and then any child can be taught to become a professional sports person or musician. Personally, I want to support the first idea more.
Many people may don't believe this but people who born with talents always out smart who doesn't. Moreover, theory that if you learn hard enough, you can be equal with talented people only true when you at low level, when you move to a higher level, the person who have talents is line "undefeated". For instance, a person in my class have to study very hard to get an A in the test, however, another person who didn't study and do the test for fun get an A plus. This example show the big difference between who are natural genius and who have artificial genius (have to learn to become genius).
On the other hand, sometime people who have natural talent isn't good as people who being taught about it. Even though this situation is very rare but every now and then it happen. For example, there is a student in my class who study very hard and another student who being called as "genius", who believe in his talent and didn't study for the exam, even though the other guy study so hard. As a result, the genius guy fail the exam while the other person get full score.
Finally, I think that some people are born with talents and some not but they can still be good as those who born with talents if they train hard enough.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'argued'.
Suggestion: argued
In this day and age, it is argue that only people who are born with cert...
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Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
... others think different. They said that every now and then any child can be taught to become a pro...
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...the first idea more. Many people may dont believe this but people who born with t...
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Suggestion: doesn't
... born with talents always out smart who doesnt. Moreover, theory that if you learn har...
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...my class have to study very hard to get an A in the test, however, another person wh...
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Suggestion: didn't
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Suggestion: an; A
...didnt study and do the test for fun get an A plus. This example show the big differe...
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Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
... though this situation is very rare but every now and then it happen. For example, there is a stud...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, while, for example, for instance, i think, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41979522184 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.363653103 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491467576792 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.25631275 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.916666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320714935937 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126076157844 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103489606982 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234585874483 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101989450622 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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