As well as making money, businesses also have a responsibility towards society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There has been an increasingly popularised opinion that businesses should make social contributions within their reasonable purview. I completely endorse this statement for the following reasons.
Initially, engaging in social projects can help bolster the firm’s public image and build its brand. If a business is willingly cooperating with the local governments to handle existing environmental issues like water pollution, and constant congestion, it is likely to receive legal support from the authorities. For instance, a company that manufactures wood furniture can obtain government approval to cut down trees faster. Therefore, it can complete the work ahead of time, maximizing customer satisfaction and loyalty.
Secondly, the revenue generated by the products may increase. As environmental issues have become more serious, customers will alter their buying habits. The business can take advantage of this opportunity to introduce environmentally-friendly products to draw the shopper’s attention and retain them, which is essential for a financial institution’s long-term success. There have been a myriad of successful enterprises that foresee this situation and take a step ahead of their opponents, like Vinfast with cars powered by electricity, and Nestcafe with straws made of paper rather than normal plastic ones. All of them soon become popular among customers, bringing huge revenue to the business.
Thirdly, community-oriented firms can attract more well-trained employers. According to one recent study, people with excellent academic credentials prefer businesses with a humanitarian mission. They consider that if a company has a desire to help the community become a better place for the citizens to live, it will treat them well and there will be no labor exploitation, which is one of the most adverse problems facing the workers these days. Moreover, if an entrepreneur becomes a sponsor of underprivileged children, they are likely to appreciate him and want to work for his corporation.
In conclusion, I believe that the business corporation's responsibility also includes social contributions for cultivating positive brand recognition, increasing sales, and enhancing the workforce. It is recommended that the government apply several measures to get business corporations to alleviate social issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 44, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'corporations'' or 'corporation's'?
Suggestion: corporations'; corporation's
...conclusion, I believe that the business corporations responsibility also includes social con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86588921283 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37632742885 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644314868805 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2306321331 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.352941176 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0880792088365 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0257322477783 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283041522814 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.051759479797 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268246959571 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.77 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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