Many people are travelling to other countries. Why? Is it a positive or negative development?
It is thought that many individuals are travelling to other countries. From my point of view, in some situation this notion have both benefits and drawbacks with each person and each occupation. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, in the industrialized world and with the appearence of modern technology the numerous people has been replaced by new innovation such as automatic robots, so travelling is greatly significant for the population life. Not only will this phenomenon provide various valuable academic, interesting information and helpful experience for adolesence which improve their mentaily life, but also tradititrional cutural can by passed on by native speaker, advance the economic background of their countries. Furthermore, more relationship can be created such as international friends or aboad students who have positive affection for their improvment. To illustrate, there was a vurvey by Packer Tee, the famous interviewer and professor, which is expert about the success of postgradutes who have more change to travel to other nations. The statistic demonstrated that nearly everyone has got plenty of achievement in their career.
On the other hand, we con not negate the drawbacks of this problem for the society. The socioeconomic trouble will be widened gradually where just wealthy individuals can have enough financial for this entertainment. Moreover, many governments take advantage from this invesment for their own revenue, harmful influencen will be led by this action to the young generations.
To conclude, though my agrument from the essay, this statement have its own strenth and weakness appropriate with each person, so the state need to have clear plans to improve their citizens for the nation's development.
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...lenty of achievement in their career. On the other hand, we con not negate the...
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...this action to the young generations. To conclude, though my agrument from the...
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...plans to improve their citizens for the nations development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51636363636 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0275953964 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5317384578 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.416666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10796310965 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511976718759 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741505401074 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0617479190996 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372182971068 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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