In this day and age, a high volume of work makes people more and more tired and pressure. They have the propensity for travelling to entertain due to its merits which are enhancing our knowledge and improvement of mental and physical health. First and foremost, travelling offers us knowledge. For instance, travelling allows us to take in different civilizations, history and even contributions to the world. As a result, it makes us more aware of the world and achieve real- life education. Furthermore, commuting to new places provides us a hand- on educational experience that can not be replaced in books or classrooms. To illustrate, we are able to experience with going zip- lining when we pay a visit to Thailand. In addition, travelling is reported to have a positive impact on health. It can boost our immune system, improve both our mood and muscle, cut down on stress. For example, trekking for hours can make our leg muscle longer and healthier. Besides, it is likely that travelling offers us a chance to have a closer- to-nature life. According to experts, people who are into nature will have a longer life-expectancy and be in a good mood than those who not. To sum up, it seems clear that travelling is a good choice of entertaining for several reasons. It is suggested that people travel as much as possible to enjoy life after exhausting study and work hours.
- Children today are to dependent on computers and electronic entertainment It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional past times than spending all day indoors Do you agree or disagree with the statement Wri 56
- Children today are too dependent on computers and electronic entertainment It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional past times than spending all day indoors Do you agree or disagree with the statement Wr 56
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child s success in school Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 55
- It is very important that children should study hard at school Time spent studying on the Internet is time wasted Do you agree or disagree You should write at least 250 words 79
- Nowadays tourism has developed and contributed a significant portion of national income to its own country Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development and give your own opinion 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82278481013 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8805743699 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603375527426 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2182311765 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.6428571429 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0649854184188 0.215688989381 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268197889272 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276339812864 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0649854184188 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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