MANY PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT SCIENTIFIC RESEARCH SHOULD BE CARRIED OUT AND CONTROLLED BY GOVERNMENTS RATHER THAN PRIVATE COMPANIES ? TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?
Scientific research is believed to be conducted and managed by governments instead of private businesses. While the government's responsibility for investigations is of course essential, I concur with those who believe that private groups are just as important.
On the one hand, the government plays a significant role in scientific experiments due to a large number of reasons. Firstly, the main benefit of the government in scientific breakthroughs is that it ensures income equality, income redistribution, and equal opportunity. For example, by providing funds for public services, infrastructure, and social welfare, like paying money to support poor people, the government consolidates income equality, income redistribution, and equal opportunity. Secondly, scientific research which had been conducted by the government must be more reliable and raise apparently no ethical concerns. The government’s experiments adopted policies of medical safety and passed many stages of censorship to ensure the product would be productive for citizens.
On the other hand, I support the view that private companies can make a positive contribution to society by researching science. By working independently, groups of private companies would be more competitive and challenging. Therefore, both the speed of research and production would be increased. There is evidence to support the idea that private entities have not only profit motive but also quality products. For example, Pfizer invented the COVID-19 vaccines and provided them for many countries at an extremely low cost.
In conclusion, although people mainly suppose that scientific experiments should be done by governments, private groups still have the same significant role.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...nstead of private businesses. While the governments responsibility for investigations is of...
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Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...t role in scientific experiments due to a large number of reasons. Firstly, the main benefit of t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y countries at an extremely low cost. In conclusion, although people mainly s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87843137255 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30156487776 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8857490133 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.307692308 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246577798374 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941827422718 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625221113303 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159041125593 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340517970945 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.82 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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