In the era of global innovation, people who live in cities have a tendency to choose either a horizontal or vertical city. However, a recent opinion has risen that a vertical city is the best condition to live in compared to that of a horizontal city. In this essay, I will illuminate both sides of the debate before coming to a conclusion.
Some people argue that living in a vertical house can bring good conditions to residents because of the convenience of this type of house. To explain, vertical houses include multi-storeys that are equipped with sufficient amenities such as supermarkets, fitness and yoga, living pools, playgrounds, schools. Therefore, residents can easily get access to these services with a short distance and time instead of looking for similar services in a place having a long distance. There could be no double that if citizens reside in a block building, they will receive convenience conditions by services of the vertical houses. Moreover, some people believe that the security of a vertical house will be safer than a horizontal house. In more detail, there are some activities that apartment buildings apply to ensure the safety of citizens such as distributing guards, setting passwords or identifying cards before entering the building. For example, if a stranger visits a building, they have to go through a security check of the building. As a result, dwellers feel more comfortable and guarded due to the high safety of a vertical city.
On the other hand, other people believe that a horizontal city can help dwellers mitigate risks related to fire issues. To be more specific, these houses are designed to be streamline with a few storeys so that residents are more likely to escape outside in the fire. Moreover, horizontal houses provide private spaces to family members. Instead of using shared areas like apartment buildings, horizontal cities tend to divide into many specific rooms. Besides, the houses can offer more spaces for a garden, playground and parking. Furthermore, it seems that the larger space of the house can be more suitable to multigenerational households while a vertical city can only apply for a small family due to limited space. (ý này hơi sai sai nhá :v nhà giàu người ta ở nhà rộng thì sao)
In conclusion, I think that living in a vertical or horizontal city will bring specific advantages so that we should take them into thorough consideration to optimize the best living conditions . While a vertical city brings convenience with sufficient amenities and a high security system, a horizontal city can ensure safety in the fire and provide private spaces and is also suitable for larger families.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...or a small family due to limited space. ý này hơi sai sai nhá :v nhà giàu người t...
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... family due to limited space. ý này hơi sai sai nhá :v nhà giàu người ta ở nhà rộng thì...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2247.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 444.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06081081081 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8218885821 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495495495495 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 731.7 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1849763969 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.263157895 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3684210526 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73684210526 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287944144137 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888047401225 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824753976192 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204295553582 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872520953012 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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