Parents should encourage their children to spend less time on studying and more time on physical activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In society, doing exercise is always an essential role in human life, many people claim that parents should motivate their offspring to devote more time to strong workout, instead of studying. From my point of view, I completely agree with this statement and the reasons for my outlook will be clarified in forthcoming paragraphs, followed by relevant illustrations.
To commence with, why guardians ought to advise their adolescent on doing physical activities, the primary reason behind is that children always live healthily without any disease should they be physically active. First and foremost, these activities promote endurance, improve blood and oxygen volume which in turn, and then increase the body's strength and concentration. Moreover, doing workout regularly results in boosting the immune system, eliminating and preventing the cause of common diseases such as diabetes, blood pressure, gout and many more. In fact, during sports activities, the body will secrete a hormone that is responsible for sleep, and vice versa, the body will release another hormone that causes insomnia without physical activities. Eventually, encouraging kids to follow the road of doing exercise will ensure children have a healthy body which plays an important role in all activities of life.
In addition to health, children could learn from playing sports such as discipline, life skills and solidarity spirit. Apart from this, it helps to reduce stress from studying, improve relationships, expand their friend circle that helps to avoid being autistic and isolated from the people around. Furthermore, children could learn how to work in groups as well as the ability to stay calm in any harsh circumstances. Football is an excellent instance of team spirit requiring the coordination of 11 people. As a result, vigorous exercise is always necessary for the lives of individuals.
In conclusion, due to the reason as juveniles live healthy, strong and always learn teamwork and more socialize in their life, I am favor of who opine parents ought to encourage their children to do more exercise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 142, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
... socialize in their life, I am favor of who opine parents ought to encourage their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38601823708 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78835913161 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61094224924 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.1776295355 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.307692308 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3076923077 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211775811807 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645534103736 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670098419041 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131678759727 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583403480247 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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