In most successful companies, some people think that communication between employers and workers is the most important factor. Other people say that other factors are more important.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is open to debate as to the most essential factor of a successful company. Some people hold a view that this must be the communication between managers and employees, while others claim that other factors are more noticeable. Both views are justifiable; however, I am a proponent of the latter.
To begin, it is reasonable why communication between employees and workers is regarded as the paramount aspect of prosperous companies. Firstly, good communication can build a connection between them and create a healthy, positive working environment. This will help employees to feel more comfortable and prepare a better mind on work, thereby boosting the work efficiency. Another reason is that there is a need for understanding between employers - who make decisions to operate a strategy and the whole company, and the workers - who implement such decisions. If the misinterpretation arises, this will lead to huge consequences to the tactics or even the setback of the company.
However, I would argue that some factors are more crucial for an enterprise to succeed. One of them is the competence of the managers. A real leader is a person who has the ability to devise creative and effective business strategies, thereby contributing to the development of the whole company. If an employer, even with excellent communication skills, cannot create such innovative ideas, the company would fail to win their rivals in the stiff competition and to prosper. Another contributing factor to the success of the company is a high quality workforce. When a company implements sensible policies, it is indispensable to have highly competent workers who can follow those tactics in the most effective way and achieve great work efficiency. This means that the company can easily gain profits from those strategies and are likely to be prosperous.
In conclusion, the understanding between employers and workers and the healthy working environment created by good communication between them would be the main reasons why some people consider it a primary factor of successful companies. However, it is my firm conviction that some other factors, such as the competence of managers and employees, are far more significant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, while, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28611898017 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12535941198 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515580736544 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6502950769 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.764705882 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7647058824 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296657009653 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889629362662 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864218860069 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212238844505 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116132027216 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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