In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
How one can easily believe of beginners decision than experts ? What to do if beginners ran in esoteric situation of his field ? Beginners are candidates who are present just to learn something from experts and replace experienced at appropriate time. Neophyte candidates tend to ask questions so frequently that sometimes expert who is dealing with the questions rans in to dilemma. I do partially agree with the topic that a beginner makes important contribution as compared to experts.
There are certain situation where experts tend to take a lead and overtake beginners in making important contributions to any field. For example, President of United States Mr. Joe Biden who is more than 70 years old and leads the most important and rich nation in world on various forefront. Mr Biden is leader not because he is from rich or poor family but due to his political contributions to countries fate in late times. Mr. Biden was choosed to lead the countries by citizens of America just because he was capable to lead country and he too proved his skills of leading country when he was Vice President of America. but this doesn't mean that beginners don't even contribute to field of inquiry.
Beginners too contribute to certain situation like Ethereum Founder who was around 26 years old when he founded the famous block chain cryptocurrency Ethereum. He was beginner just by the age not by knowledge and talent. The contribution of ethereum is well recognized by experts in the field of cryptography. This particular blockchain cryptocurrency lead to ease in developing new cryptocurrency. He not just solved the problem of making the universal and interdependent blockchain but he too build the expertise to deal with complex problem. Its his talent which helped him in inventing such a unique solution which is accepted in world wide.
In the field of inquiry, this is not just single contributions of beginners but there are many more. Some time ago, a NASA junior scientist collected photographs taken by telescope and started analysing in mean time. While observation he found an interesting thing in one of the photograph and spotted a new planet which was extremely minute. The scientist was capable to do so not just because of talent but also due to his enthusiasm in exploring photographs. He was not only recognised in NASA for his contribution but received an praise from citizens world wide for his curiosity.
We can't differentiate a person just because he/she is beginner or expert. We need to differentiate a person on his curiosity, talent and knowledge. If a person consists of these capabilities then he definitely contribute to important aspects or problems.
- Young people should be encouraged to pursue long term realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition 58
- To understand the most important characteristics of a society one must study its major cities 83
- Teacher s salaries should be based on their student s academic performance 50
- Government s should focus on solving immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problem s in the future 50
- Leaders are created by demands that are placed on them 54
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, thus, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2240.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 444.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04504504505 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99401159843 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504504504505 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 709.2 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8599033601 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.29166666667 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289098265291 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095059607915 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100023374887 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161925802423 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666175433899 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.