Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child's success at school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this day and age, it is often argued that whether classmates have a more crucial influence on a child's success at school or parents do. In my experience, i think parents are more influential on children due to three reasons which will be stated in the paragraphs below.
To begin with, parents are the greatest modals. In our daily life, it is our parents who always try to avoid us from social evils and other distractors by becoming the best person in our eyes. They always try to have the best looking in our eyes. Consequently, children will look up to their parents and try their best to get closer to their parents' images.
Subesequently, parents are the best advisors. Living under the same rooftop for years causes parents to understand us better than anyone else. As a result, our merits and demerits are now understandable to parents and they can give us the worthest advices in any situations. Moreover, our parents are most likely to understand the importance of education, so they will do their best to set the path for us. For instance, we are provided with all kinds of studying materials. In consequence, our motivation is greatly boosted.
Last but not least, parents are our first educators. The one who teach us from the simpliest as crawling or standing to such complicated actions as talking or dancing is our parents. They have brought us up and given us so many things that we will be indebt for the rest of our life.
To conclude, it is undeniable that parents play a more vital role than classmates in the school life of children. Without parents, a child can never achieve success at school
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, look, moreover, so, for instance, i think, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72027972028 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63584421067 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555944055944 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4776084325 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4117647059 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185185974461 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069797429084 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754787914733 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13224948916 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994121179075 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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